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HappyHappySI
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(9/23/02 6:28 pm)
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Review of Comic needed...
Since other people seem to be plugging their comic, I figured I'd do it too.
Evilpai
currently has 41(I think) comics
By the way, Joshi also has one comic here.
Got Pai?Edited by: HappyHappySI at: 9/25/02 4:30:31 pm
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Squiggles the chao 
Disgruntled Child of Chaos
(9/25/02 6:59 pm)
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HappyHappySI
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(9/25/02 7:23 pm)
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Thanks, Squiggles. I wanted to create better backgrounds, it's just I haven't gotten around to it yet. As for the "author-bashing", I think I'll be stopping that. The content will gradually change(meaning no more I like swords comments) and get more orginal over time and as I get new ideas. Right now, I'm working on an ice cream wave.
The beginning about 30 comics were where I was messing around and getting used to making the comics(Although I liked explosion week, It was getting annoying to have no real plot, so I've gotten over that and added plot). The only problem with creating original content is that I've read quite a few web comics and it's getting harder and harder to create new ideas.
By the way, to all of you out there who don't like sprite comics, I would make a handdrawn comic, if I could draw well enough that it seems legitimate enough(in my opinion)for other people to read.
But thanks again, Squiggles
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Squiggles the chao
Disgruntled Child of Chaos
(9/25/02 8:09 pm)
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The ice cream was one of the things I like. Explosion week was good, but not great As for the backgrounds, it is a sprite comic, you can rip a background form a game, that's perfectly acceptable.
As for origionality, try to use none of the conventions of pervious works, that has worked for me both in Kulcok vs Stalin and Frank the Chao (though I am often poking fun at Psyguy, but I digress). Try to use characters that other comics do not (It's a little too late for the FF characters, but meh). And if you do use them, create new personalities for them that has been previously tried.
I admit, the first two episodes of Frank were kinda bland, only really worthy of two hits, but it got better over time (I think tomorrows is one of the best, if not the best, yet). That's why I make these reviews, mostly for comics that I feel can be good, but need improvement. I really don't give out awards to 5 hit material (and if I did I'd doubt they'd care).
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Perfect Dream Leo 
One man.
Over 10 accounts.
The odds are against him, in the..
MOOGLE CAVERN ZONE.
(9/25/02 8:20 pm)
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Hey Squigs, do you do those for a lot of comics? If so, you should get a review page or some suchlike thing, where everyone could read your reviews.
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Squiggles the chao
Disgruntled Child of Chaos
(9/25/02 8:34 pm)
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Not really, this is only the third. I really only do it for those who I can speak to, and would be accepting of the reviews. Also, I could, in theory write a review for VGCats, or the famous Moogle, but it's doubful that they'd care. I do plan on writing more however.
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HappyHappySI
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(9/25/02 8:38 pm)
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Hmmm... I plan to shrink some images and stick them in as backgrounds, but any suggestions as to where I can find backgrounds for my comic?
I saw your review on Doom Hero's comic. What was the other one?
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Perfect Dream Leo
One man.
Over 10 accounts.
The odds are against him, in the..
MOOGLE CAVERN ZONE.
(9/25/02 8:40 pm)
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I know I like to know what I'm doing wrong if I'm working on a project, personally. o_o
Some people could really find it helpful. And plus, other people could use your reviews to see which comics they could be checking out. Put some thought into it. ;D
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BlueJoshi 
Tastes like chicken
(9/25/02 8:41 pm)
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I knew I've been forgetting something. XP I'll try to start on actual episodes for mine tomorrow.
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Squiggles the chao
Disgruntled Child of Chaos
(9/25/02 8:46 pm)
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The other was not important, It was Martin's comic, which is now cancelled. As for images, all of the backgrounds in Kulock vs Stalinare from Google's image search.
Leo: I'll consider it.
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HappyHappySI
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(9/25/02 8:55 pm)
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Joe: Good! Now we'll have two comics with more than one episode!
But as for the review site thing, I agree with Leo. And if so, their should be a variety of people judging the comic, then giving the average rating and improvements. For example, if one person out of twenty thinks that a comic is bad, then the comic is for the most part a success.
You could have a good review site going if you made it, Squiggles.
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MagiSonic 
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(9/25/02 9:26 pm)
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EDIT: Squggs gots it, no need for it now
Edited by: MagiSonic at: 9/26/02 7:08:25 pm
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Gold sonic 
Still just a potato
(9/26/02 5:55 am)
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*Looks at review post*
*Looks at Squiggles*
*Starts cackling evilly*
Hey, Squiggles...SIIIIIIIIG please. Oh, and people should note that the keenspace page has been updated with all-new...uh...parts of an episode. I'll get around to completing it eventually...
EDIT: ...and I just did! Episode 13 is done, and Season 1 is completed. No more new episodes for a long, long time.
Edited by: Gold sonic at: 9/27/02 11:14:52 am
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Squiggles the chao
Disgruntled Child of Chaos
(9/26/02 6:46 pm)
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Magi: I'm working on it. You have a lot of comics to go through you know. Same for Gold.
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HappyHappySI
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(9/26/02 8:42 pm)
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Oh, by the way, I'm looking for opinions from everyone. That way I can find out what I need to improve and how much.
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Edweirdo
Warning: 25%
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(9/26/02 9:19 pm)
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AHHH RUN AWAY RUN AWAY LUCKETT IS COMING!!
But seriously? Try making original characters, not edited, but original. Seriously, you can do it. I sure can.
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HappyHappySI
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(9/26/02 9:26 pm)
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Thanks, Ed. I'l add new characters, but I"ll keep the old ones, or I'll be doing a completely re-done comic which would take me way too long. The only problem is that when I make characters, I try and get them perfect. Before I started the comic, I physically made some of the FF characters pixel by pixel. So, to make new ones, it'll take me awhile. Plus, I'd need to come up with ideas.
Hmm... GOT ONE!
You'd know exactly what I'm talking about if you TRULY knew Senor Infinito.
Yes... I see it now...
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MagiSonic
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(9/26/02 10:04 pm)
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Trust me, you don't want your sprite comic reviewed by Luckett.
RIGHT, ED?
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Squiggles the chao
Disgruntled Child of Chaos
(9/26/02 11:21 pm)
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Magi:
Leo, Gold, and anyone else who cares: I did it. Gold, you can check this page tomorrow, and expect it to be there. I'm not gonna post it here. I'll update the Frank the Chao webpage in the next few days to get instructions for submitting your comic for a review. I'll rework the page to be prettier later.
Edited by: Squiggles the chao at: 9/26/02 11:24:41 pm
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HappyHappySI
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(9/28/02 12:15 pm)
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Hmmm... Squig, could you re-rate my site when its been redone(new charcaters, backgrounds, etc.)?
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Squiggles the chao
Disgruntled Child of Chaos
(9/28/02 1:52 pm)
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Yea.
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